I recently read this excellent blog entry on songwriting by Stephen Altrogee. After I read it I realized my songs are the complete opposite of what he is describing. Maybe I should try to improve on lyrics like this:
"Everyone's a spitz-o-matic
When we jam it is fantastic
Come on join our song
Hope it lasts all day long"
or
"I'm so funky
I'm so fresh and funky
I'm so funky
I don't know what to do."
Here is an example of one of Stephen's songs:
We were blind and lost and godless
Wandering a trackless waste
Then hope arose, a glorious beacon
Like the star the wise men chased
Well, time will tell if I can improve my song writing. For now I'd still like to release my self entitled CD, "Everyone's A Spitz-O-Matic." Maybe my second one will have "eye-popping" metaphors. Stay tuned ...
Saturday, September 25, 2010
Thursday, September 2, 2010
Myrtle Beach Vacation; New Patio; Joint Cooking Venture; Marriage Retreat w/ the Hills
On August 8th Mari and I headed down to South Carolina's Myrtle Beach for our 'babymoon.' It was so relaxing and we had a great time. Below are some pics from our time:
On August 20th - 22nd, Mari and I went to a marriage retreat up in Pennsylvania w/ our good friends the Hills.
While we were gone, we put in a new patio ... here are the before and after pictures.
On August 20th - 22nd, Mari and I went to a marriage retreat up in Pennsylvania w/ our good friends the Hills.
Well, that's it for now. Life will be full until our Baby arrives around 10/23. Stay tuned for more photo updates of life and food.
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